Hello there my name is Carla Santos an this is my blog, im 20 years old and im studiying Internacional Relations
1.Actually I don’t play any sports but I like to see soccer games on the tv
specially wen is the classic game whit Barcelona and real Madrid, before get in university I play a little of volleyball whit my class mates at the school but I remember in the third grade I play soccer to, now days I don’t play any one but is very entertaining and I don’t have a favorite soccer team. My favorite sport is volleyball and swim; I’ll go to the Magico Gonzales stadium to learn to swim, at the beginning I was whit fear but then all was good and nice
2. my favorite movies are from scare, action or documentary based on real life, I see the movies at home because is more comfortable and is less expensive because I see on the internet, is very weird that I’ll go to the cinema to see one but when I go to the cinema I like to go whit my friends because I have great time whit them, the last one movie I saw was the planet of the apes 2, whit my mother and not was too good for me.
3. other interests I have is for foreign affairs and for bringing help to the kids at the school, kids without opportunities to have an extracurricular classes and better their backgrounds and abilities, also i like to get a new background of leadership and social movements to have a better politics for the El Salvador and be a part of the young people that is interested for make a change for El Salvador and contribute whit something, but the most great part of this is that I can do something not necessary with money, because I can do something being a part of an organization.
Be careful with spelling such as "with", "I'm" (always use capital letter when referring to "I"), "too", "Nowadays," "At the beginning I was AFRAID..." "scary movies,"
ResponderEliminarBe careful with capital letters such as "Real,"Planet of the Apes 2"
Be careful with prepositions/pronouns such as "A little volleyball," "to learn HOW to swim,"
Be careful with punctuation. Remember to use a period when an idea is complete. For example: "...or documentary based on real life. I watch movies at home..."
Be careful on how to use some words and tenses, "is very weird that I’ll go to the cinema to see one..." the correct way to write it is "It is very uncommon to go to the cinema and watch one"
"whit my mother and not was too good for me." The correct way to write it is "with my mother and it wasn't that good, for me."
Be careful when using a translator because the choose of words are not the same as the structures seen in class. This is intermediate English and you should use a dictionary instead of a translator.
For this assignment, you have 5.